Clover Doggendoodle
TTF Olympics Queen!
Age: 121
Joined: 30 Jan 2006
Posts: 99
Location: Here
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...Clover and Zippety joined in the countdown. Then Clover pressed the green button. The rockets flared up more, the ship shook, and fire and steam filled the space under the rocket. Clover let out one last hoot, but she couldn't even hear herself. Then the rocket started to lift off, and it accelerated and pushed Clover and Zippety back in their seats."
I have been writing a story in the past two weeks or so, and I just finished it. Sorry about the bad timing since Lawbot HQ opened on test and everyone is most likely on test, but I thought my story could be something else to do instead of fighting the CJ or getting merits or bucks. It is a rather long story, but I had an absolute BLAST writing it, and I believe it is incredibly enjoyable to read, if I do say so myself  . Whenever you may have the time to read this on a rainy, don't-feel-like-getting-my-merits day, just click on the picture below and enjoy!
Edit: I put it in my signature.
Last edited by Clover Doggendoodle on Thu Apr 13, 2006 11:38 pm; edited 1 time in total
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LadyZ
Thingummyjig Fairy
Age: 29
Joined: 05 Oct 2005
Posts: 6560
Location: Nagging MST
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I have read the first 2 chapters and I love it! I can't wait to read the rest but it will have to wait until tomorrow. Way to go Clover!!!
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Granny MoMo
Betty Ruth
Age: 38
Joined: 26 Oct 2005
Posts: 5448
Location: Singing Numa Numa... Clown Pen UP! Oh, look! A quarter!! Looking for the Doughnut shop...
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Ahhhh, a fellow author!  Good luck!!
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Loopy
Passing out cookies
Age: 38
Joined: 13 Oct 2005
Posts: 2544
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Wow Clover! I just finished the first chapter and I have to say...You Rock! I am so impressed! Will finish the rest throughout the day!
Good Job!
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LadyZ
Thingummyjig Fairy
Age: 29
Joined: 05 Oct 2005
Posts: 6560
Location: Nagging MST
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Clover, I just now got around to finishing the story. Bravo!! *wild applause* I love it! From the setting, to the names and toony situations, it is easy to see how much you put into it. I am very impressed!!
Anyone who has not read this, I highly recommend that yuou do so ASAP!
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MissPoutyFace
Griefer In Training
Age: 49
Joined: 06 Dec 2005
Posts: 2891
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OK - I'm on chapter 3 (don't tell me what happens!!)
This is so much fun - I wish I could have gotten this secret task
You're writing style is so funny I can't read fast enough.
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Dr. CT
Toontown Central Toon
Age: 45
Joined: 12 Mar 2006
Posts: 48
Location: colorado
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I started reading this to my son last night, " MOm I don't want to read it it's just a piece of paper, no pictures" "Trust me Honey" I say. After we finished the first paragraph, "Mom that is so cool, it's about toon town!" End of first chapter, "Why can't we read more?" "Because it's your bedtime and I didn't print out the rest!"
Great story, I'm looking forward to tonight.
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