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do you like it?
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idahomom
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:24 pm    Post subject:
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Hello its me again and I decided I would post a series of books called the story of toontown. I am currently posting the first book called "The menace begins". enjoy!!!

Chapter 1 The Building.
"Arrrrgggghhh!!!" Said cool soupy as he was walking down pajama place. "I'll never get these cashbot h.q. tasks done with these countless bossbot invasions!!!" "It makes no sense, completely NO SENSE!!!" he stood and thought for a second. "Hmmm..." He snaped his fingers. " Thats it!!! I'll go visit my friend, Powers Erge!!!" He walked to Powers Erge's house. "Hello? HELLO?!?!" He saw a letter that read:" leave dreamland. Everyone evacuate toontown. Its not safe at all anymore, not at all." in the house, his chair was leaning over on the ground, split in half, a bookshelf that was cracking with many of it s books on the floor, broken. His desk had been splintered and torn apart to shreds. The carpet was torn in half completely, and his toolbox was on the floor with a message scratched on there saying: "Those who dare to enter my house again may find the last remains of me useful." in the box, there was a skull of a mouse, probably from Powers Erge, a couple of outlets, an important looking flute, a phoniex feather with a ink bottle, and a diary with a note saying "DO NOT OPEN!!!"
Cool Soupy opened the diary and saw only a to do list that read: visit whispering widow. lock up shop. stay alert till tomorrow. Dont be attacked. Cool Soupy thought that this must of happened yesterday, and considering all the bones in there, probably didn't escape. a grumbling sound of a cog came from the door. Cool Soupy quickly rushed behind the collapsing bookshelf. A bunch of cogs came in including a big cheese level 11, a mingler level 8, a tightwad level 6, and a bloodsucker level 4. The big cheese, which was considerably the chief of this group, pulled out a remote, and pressed a button. for a second the building seemed flat, and then the colors started changing around and they were suddenly at the prison room on the top floor of a cog building. The leader of the cog said " as we know, the C.E.O is working on the base. How silly all the toons were to think our home base would be next to those fools Chip and Dale. Not at all would they expect it to be flying over toontown central!! even goofy and his workers at the shop are helping us!!! Well, except for that darned Graham Pree of course. But we'll have to keep the secret of goofy speedway a secret of course, but otherwise we'll be unstoppable!!!"


Chapter 2: Flair, Unfair, and Nightmare.

"To scared to race me?" "ARRRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!" Link, another toon, had been trying to beat the speedway master "Top Dog" Eagles Eye all day! He would leave the rest in ashes as he triumphantly dashed to the finish line. 2 Other toons, Brown and Lefty, joined in. "We're not sacred!" "Then Race!" 3...2...1... GO!!!! Link got in front of eagle and the other 2 on the left. "HA!" Said Eagle. he turned his car out of the trap doing a 90 degree axis, which ment he was driving backwards. He went at 82 miles per hour and spun around the track in a 180, knocking brown far behind.link managed an anvil on
eagle, and lefty knocked him at the gate. Brown recovered at at a speed boost everyone else missed. Just as Eagle was starting to recover at the base, link pulled in front of him and lefty hit his right, then they all reached a hill. brown was going fast. Really fast. And maybe just a little too fast. as brown was in the back, Eagles Eye hit the brakes at the top which made his kart stick diagonally up in the air. Brown went up his kart and flew up high in the air. Eagle was done for now. His car turned at a 360 angle and hit the wall with the back of his car, which the only good of that was sending him to the hospital. Brown then dived down in mid-air with his kart and hit the ground which made a giant explosion, whereas blowing up his kart and sending Links kart on fire.
but the one was the air cleaner was lefty. the one with the fire absorber was lefty, which sped him up to the finish."1st place is... LEFTY!!! 2nd place is... LINK! 3rd place is... BROWN!!! 4th place is... Eagle?!?! Eagle was still on track all along!!! And he finshed first!!! wait the time is... Link: 3.30.00 Lefty: 3.30.15 Brown: 3.34.72 Eagle 3.32.00... Link first, Lefty second, Eagle third, brown last." They all teleported back to the speedway. Eagles Eye walked up to Link. "Here's the prize, lost." Gasp!


Chapter 3 The V.P.'s Last Stand
I... I... I'M FALLLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIIINNNNNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!! Yes, he was actually falling. He jumped out the window of a cog building, and he'll never do it again. "Offfff..." He laid there on the ground for a second. YAHHHHHHHRAAgggggghhhhh!!!! He got up. "I will never, EVER, Do that again. Anyways, I think the V.P. might have something to do with this." He teleported to sellbot hq. the cogs gasped "who is he?" "dont hurt me, im a new model." "Welcome to cogtown!" "HI:{)" He walked through the doors to the VP, in his toon shirt from the cattalouge. The VP said " HUH? What business do you have here?" "I want to know what the secret of goofys speedway is." " It's a secret, use your common sense, Dumb-bell." "YOU KNOW WHAT IT IS, BUT I DON'T, SO HOW ABOUT YOU TELL ME, DUMB-BELL!!!" "Ok... i'll tell you IF..." "If what?" "IF YOU PASS THE TEST!!! BWAHAHAHAHAH!"The VP started laughing really loud, and then a tornado surrounded him and there was a bright flash. The VP was actually a giant spider all along!!! "Oh boy... even though I've never battled CJ, I hope I have one in my pocket..." He pulled out a cannon. "Au revoir, spidey." THHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHWANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!! He was out of the sellbot HQ, but the VP was loose.



It took time to think of, but the excellent chapter 4, revenge of the blueprints!!!

"Hmmmm?" GASP! THE WORD COLOR CHANGED, YAYYYYYY!!!" Said Link. Ok, that was a blooper. Toontown Rewind, vurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrp! "Blueprints of... of... of... the bossbot hq!!!" " Wei Wei, bonjour!" Said a weirdo French guy. "Howly.. Holey cow!!! This is so much excitement I have to go pee, so where is the nearest bathroom?" " Haw Haw! The nearest la salle de bains? Go straight to the la cuisine, past my la chambre and you should be there." Link came back from the bathroom and asked "Thanks, whats your name?" "Je m' appelle cheif cheateu." "Gotta leave your ,uh, la maison. see you soon." He left the house. he checked the blueprints and they said bshocked open the 3510 plastic and remove any of the stains with brush. Then add the 30 + 4 -450= 90000 sheet and decode the 011100110011111000110010101000 code,then... and so on.EA07 pne jem was a note( can also be found in qeltrorrvenennafgnfhdaawqsaqqr and was a joke the french guy put on when link was in the "water closet".) on the blue print "Ha ha! Love! None of that!" said Link. "No, at least not for you, bub!!!


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heidik2007
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:29 pm    Post subject:

Shocked
WOW! Nice start! That story is really starting to creep me out...................... Shocked
I can't wait to read the next part of the story!

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idahomom
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:38 pm    Post subject:

The next part of the story isn't so creepy, except the last part...

P.S. if anyone was wondering, there are 21 chapters.

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Sheriff Huddles
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 6:45 am    Post subject:

Wow!! Thats amazing! You can write really good!!

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heidik2007
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 8:25 am    Post subject:

Yikes! Shocked The VP was a spider all along.........I knew it! Razz This story is turning out great. Very Happy

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Goofo
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 4:22 pm    Post subject:

I read the story yesterday and I thought it was pretty cool. Smile

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idahomom
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:32 pm    Post subject:

Wei Wei! Chapter 4 is finally here, bonjour!

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