She lay in bed all snug. Drool came from her mouth. Fluffy, a 15 laff toon cat was asleep in her new bed, she lived in Giggleyhills, Donalds Dreamland. Suddenly she heard a bang a big one, coming from the attic. She was scared, so she took her teddy doodle, and went up the curved staircase and saw it, there it was, a poltergeist, no any poltergeist, a furry one with a huge snout and a shirt, half torn, the other half covered in blood, the poltergeist toon was about half her size, it was a dog, did I mention. She scream as the poltergeist ran towards her, she turned the light on, and he disappeared down the hall. Her mother and father, Mr nd Mrs McToon, where sitting there with a dirty look, they sent her to bed with a glass of water. But she woke up to another startling noise, she was stunned, again the weird poltergeist, looked her right in the eyes and then, boom, she was dead, Fluffy just had looked into his eye and died, with her eyes open.

If this is Chapt 1 I can't wait to hear Chapt 2